Linggo, Hulyo 29, 2012

Romeo and Juliet Relief

     The relief of Romeo and Juliet in the original story is beautiful because the feeling was intense and it touches the heart of the people that is reading the story. The nurse's role there is very important because she do most of the comic relief of Romeo and Juliet.Juliet is dying in that part and the nurse is the one who speaks most.

     For me, the Comic Relief is perfect but I will change a little part there. Romeo must not commit suicide because it is good to see Romeo is giving flower to Juliet on her tomb every day or every time Romeo visits Juilet's tomb. It looks sweeter than suicide.

Sabado, Hulyo 28, 2012

Romeo and Juliet Rewritten Ending

     
      The ending for me is not what I expected. I expected another ending for it. I would rather have another ending for it. It has a hanging story for me because I expect more on it. The ending is good but if I will rewrite it, I think it will be more interesting.

     I want an ending when the climax is finished, the resolution is next when it is finished. I don't want a hanging ending in a story. If i will rewrite the ending of Romeo and Juliet, it is like this. When Romeo will die in the scene, he will be revived by kiss of Juliet. Isn't it beautiful? Its for my opinion only

Sabado, Hulyo 21, 2012

Changing World

     Many of the people are using technology nowadays. There are illegal loggers that did not replacing the trees that they are cutting down. Transportation are abundant too. And people are disposing their garbage at not the proper place. Many of them are harmful in our environment.

     Pollution can cause Chlorofluorocarbon that can kill plants, animal as well as humans. Loss of trees can kill people that is lying at low places. Garbage that are clogged in the canals are the cause of flashflood. Climate change can cause sickness to the people has low resistance. The ozone layer is depleting because of pollution that people that are making.

     We can lessen the pollution by recycling. We can lessen the garbage and we can use it again. Planting trees like the project of the president. It can produce more oxygen and it can hold the soil so it can prevent landslides. There are many ways to protect the planet Earth and many of the people are destroying it. They are not concerned to the health of Earth . Later on, the Earth will be hotter and we may die because of it.